Feedback on Draft

Research & Planning:

• I must analyse and evaluate how each stage of my research will help me decide on my final choices
• I must use a variety of presentational device
• I need to find more examples of inspiration from existing magazines, to show me other techniques and conventions - especially for my double page spread.

Front Cover:

• Good iconography
• Need to help communicate the genre & audience better.
• Fonts a bit simplistic

Contenets:

• Try to create a logo instead of 'Amp'
• Change to different pictures in the Polaroid effect
• Change the fonts of headings

Double Page Spread:

• Need to reference music/band in first paragraph
• shorten the length of paragraphs
• Change the layout as it is too simplistic